All Comments on 'Juliana's Summer of Lost Innocence'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
rushed

You rushed the end. Juliene was way to gung ho and enthusiatic that she got to 69 her mother continuously. . She even was enthusiastic and wanted to do it in the car so now its time and she wimps out. Sound like a third chapter will come soon because a good story got left in thin air.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
way 2 ...

Way 2 short as in wham - bam thank you mam but no mam to the fullest and it is over.!** WHAT..?? Well it is your story to tell and I will say no more than that but it was nice while it was being told.!^^

Thank you.

J

trigudistrigudisalmost 8 years agoAuthor
Thanks For The Comments

Juliana is confused about her sexuality. She denies she's a lesbian, yet she engages in sex with another woman - and not just any woman, but her own mother. A sequel, if there is one, will chronicle her struggle to come to terms with her deviant sexuality.

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