All Comments on 'Julia's New Patient Ch. 04'

Very nice story line but could you in the ensuing chapters not have him call you "mommy" Just mom should suffice.

Great story so far! All of the chapters have gotten me very... excited. Oh, please keep using "mommy", much more sexy that just "mom", to me at least. And I noticed that you referred to James as Walter in one line from this chapter. Not a big deal of course, just letting you know.

After reading all chapters I'm not all that impressed, you can't keep names straight, the first chapter was interesting but went downhill from there.

You do have a gift, but should proof read before sending it in.

...who wrote "Amazing Story." It's great when a boy calls his mother "mommy," as she's stroking his stiff young prick with her firm motherly hand, or, of course, as the boy's shoving his big fat dick up her cunt. When the boy blows his hot young balls up his mother's twat, it should be, "MOMMMY!" More please from this highly gifted author.

Apparently you have no idea how stories are written on this site. Others are just as good or much better than yours and complete in 3 or 4 pages. I'm giving up on you.

Here is a link to the best story I've ever read on this site.

http://www.literotica.com/s/for-mom-the-son-also-rises

Unlike some of the comments about 'speeding it up'.....I think your slow, maternal seduction works very well......keep going with your style of story-telling.....Great job....very erotic to read.....

Thank you to the folks who pointed out me mixing up some names. These have been repaired, and a new version of Ch 4 will be posted when the moderators get around to it- a few days? They will then delete this one. In the meantime, this version remains here, defects still included.

Enjoy! And remember, nobody is perfect!

I love your writing, and love the story, but I'm dissapointed that you have chosen to stop where you have. Great work, but the finish has left me cold. I'm sorry if you find this offensive, but it appears as if you are more interested in teasing, and "jerking the chain". I'm sorry, but I won't be following any more of your writing. You, like many others, are more interested in 'emotional masturbation' than you are with fulfillment. Maybe it's a guy thing, or just me... But being tittilated like this isn't a turn on, and in real life, if it happens, I walk away from my partner. No callbacks, no email. No questions asked, no answers volunteered. Sorry, but you lost a reader.

Please don't wait months to post your next chapter. I like the story but think you should have had real sex with him in this one.

And I'm sorry that there are some folks who just feel teased. For me, the teasing and the 'head games' ARE the central feature. Manipulation, belittling, exhibitionism, and witholding are the main turn-on for me in my fantasies. BUT: In real life, I would not want to be teased like that for very long, so I certainly understand some folks get frustrated. There are many options on Literotica, and I know you can find stories elsewhere that get right to the fucking.

Meanwhile, I appreciate VERY MUCH those folks who have written who enjoy my work. Even when I don't write back, I do read every letter and I thank you for your thoughts.

Thank you writing such a hot sexy story. I love how you are taking your time with all the the story line. I am also enjoying all the teasing and mind games. That is so hot. The way you tell about what is being worn really paints a nice picture. This is something that I will read over again. I am looking forward to the next captor.

I am hopping that you will include more players. IE more sexy woman with there sons and or daughters. Pleas have all the woman dressed sexy. stockings,heels ect.

i loved i ende up jacking off and im onley 11

I agree about dropping mommy. I don't understand why sons resort to calling their moms 'mommy' during sex in these stories, when they previously haven't or don't. It's also a total turn-off.

Otherwise, good work.

Julia,

I for one love a great tease and feel its important to the whole story. The only thing I could suggest is that you continue from where you left off in the last chapter. For example, you left off with Billy in Ch. 3, but how did you get to James sitting on the bed in Ch.4? Did all this transpire the same day/night or was it weeks later?

I look forward to your continuing chapters :)

I really enjoyed your story. And, I suspect my feedback would go along with the other person who left an ID. I think anonymous comments are worthless. I read one story where the mom and son went out on a date on a first name basis as lovers.

If James is an adult, it's rather insulting to figure he'd want to call his mother Mommy. Still, I don't want to just complain about what you didn't do, because you took the time to set a mood, James in just a towel, his mom all dolled up and doing her best to be provocative yet subdued too.

I look forward to Chapter 5.

You write amazing stories perfect detail, awesome build up, great suspense. please keep the series going.

now having read chapter four of the out standing fantastic very exciting story.

all i can say is more please more of this incredable story with out a doubt this takes some beating.

Hello Julia ,

After just coming across your series of short stories about your adventures with Billy and then your son , i can only say you seem to have found the perfect way to build the plot of the story with just enough infomation , but yet not enough to let the story become long and drawn out .

As for the other people here saying that mommy ect is a turn off well thats upto them but its your story , your imagination so you write it as you see fit , for me personally i find it a turn on when a boy reverts to the term mommy ,but thats just me .

So all i can say is keep up the good work and get the next chapter out asap and i will be waiting eagerly to see where the story goes many thanks for you efforts x

Which makes him. ???

love to see more of Julia and her son and especially of her patient and his mom, sharon.

kisses bobbie

I hope there's more to come. The story can't end here. Can it??

Wonderfully kinky and well done. Why have you stopped?

Of all the chapters I have read, I am giving this a 2 star rating for one big reason ... at the outset of this chapter you stated you were taking a break and would be back to continue this story ... it is now 8 years later. It is really discouraging to read good work only to have its author just disappear.

Lucky Boy as I too have always dated older women starting with the first one at 16 and she was a 32 year old Georgia Peach, by 20 I was dating a divorced 36 ear old brunette bartender, by 23 I was screwing a 47 year old Blonde businesswoman who had a better figure then her 2 girls, and even now I have one 22 yrs old and she is not only a 3 hole wild slut she is my Sex Slave that I have trained to cum just from the sound of my voice. And she is also bisexual and Loves to 69 with younger women for my pleasure.. The only thing better would be a sister Slave..

Enjoyed the story. Could not decide if the mother was concerned about her son's sexual welfare or her own. Series rated 4 stars.

This chapter breaks Literotica's rules!: James is 16 when mommy tugs on his cock and makes him shoot off when they're in bed together! How that got past the censors is beyond me! It IS, however, hot as fuck! One of my favorite penthouse-type letters describes a mother, upon seeing her son's bedclothes askew, spies her son's first downy crop of pubic hair. She proceeds to suck him to completion and does so on two subsequent nights as well. He then asks to get in bed with her on some flimsy excuse. She awakens to find him rubbing his erect penis against her. Feigning sleep, she maneuvers herself to let him ease on in, coming soon afterwards. Hot stuff, right? First pubes probably had him at thirteen or so. I understand why Literotica's rules are in place, but it always seems so unrealistic and artificial to have him come awake at 18.

A couple of readers said she was nothing but a tease. Huh? She's right there on her son's bed seducing him, proceeding to blow his cock and his mind! How can that be construed as teasing? It's the same with all her young male clientele: She maybe loves the teasing buildup, but she always follows through, which, of course, she could lose her license over. It's not teasing if she's putting out, right? She IS most certainly a seductress; she knows what she wants and gets it. She loves the power it gives her over all these boys on the cusp of manhood. They are helpless to her onslaught cuz they desperately want what she's dangling in front of them: her sex! And she doesn't cruelly leave them hanging- she's no tease: she wants what they've got- a hard young cock full of the hot cream she craves. That's a WIN WIN in anybody's book!

the one problem i DO have is she's tossed her son off, she's ascertained that he definitely wants it all and now... NOTHING! Don't you think over ELEVEN FUCKING YEARS is a long enough break from this story? especially when you've teased us about a threesome with hubby and the two fat cocks she wants to stroke together with the same hand, pressing their cocks together, stroking them off to a glorious cum? Maybe making them lick cum off each other's belly? It would only take the addition of one of her clients to make her airtight! Truly a cumslut! And i say that with reverence in my heart. So what's keeping you from it?! Are you fingers too busy doing other things (wink wink nudge nudge)?! Get on it! We only have so long on this earth. If you don't publish a chapter 5, maybe it's you, the writer, that's the TEASE! I hope my words titillated you as much as yours did mine. Time to end your vacation, dearie