All Comments on 'Julie and Her Teacher Pt. 03'

Love it. Keep writing.

I've been a teacher and can understand his feelings toward Julie. However, I could not give this story a higher rating because of all the grammatical errors. You need an editor to correct such errors as Todd calling Julie "Mrs." Henderson, and not knowing the difference between the possessive "your" and the contraction "you're." Don't publish part 4 until it is properly edited.

I love your story. I honestly keep coming back just to read your stories. This one in particular.

So MANY grammar, spelling, capitalization etc mistakes! I can't ignore them! You didn't capitalize "English" or "Friday". You had probably ten sentence fragments. Are you British? You used the word, "smelt" which is definitely a British word. "Re" is not a word, unless you're singing, "Doe, Re, Mi"! The space between " re" and "dressed" was incorrect. You made the same type of mistake twice.

As I said before, the silly mistakes took away from the story, which was about a C- average. Part 1 and 2 were okay, but part 3 was crap. I didn't like the plot with Mr. Rogers.

I love these stories keep up the great work

I know you havent updated in years, but please!!! I just loved this story so much!! I really wanna know how it ends!!