All Comments on 'Julie and Tonya'

Seems to be written by a pubescent teen!

Notice I did not say "nice story" since it is not a story. It is just a story treatment. I think it is a good outline for a story, but you need to go back and flesh it out.

A 3* keep writing score is all I can give this.

And they will one day wonder why their children are so confused about their sexual identity, and so fucked up in their characters and lives.

Only in the world of fiction could this be considered interesting or desirable.

A story about Mormons,purportedly, written by a moron. Totally disjointed, pointless story about nothing.

The story was entertaining, well written, but without enough story to reach a 5* rating. I will read more of your offerings and look forward to a more substantial story.

Thanks for sharing.