All Comments on 'Julie Covington McGill Ch. 02'

Very cute Mitchette. All the signs of a brilliant idea as you were composing. Love it.

Are you using that nickname in hopes of getting a guilt ridden blow job too??!!

Thanks for you kind words. I'm starting to flesh out ideas for Chapter 3, so suggestions are welcome!

I love this story! Please keep it going. So many possibilities opening up.

Love the background story especially that she had some fun in the back of a minivan (I love car sex stories) :) Keep the stories coming please 😄

Are you sure this is your first story?

Please keep the installments cumming, girl.

BTW, I'm not a fan of facials b/c they seem degrading. But swallowing is cool...and gives your complexion a certain glow. :-)

Lol Anonymous...truth be told, I'm not a huge fan of facials either, but I'll tolerate them, as long as it doesn't get in my hair! But I know guys love em, so I have to give my readers what they want. I agree, swallowing g is so much neater, and more tasty.

Thanks to all who have read, voted and/or commented. Once again, I'm floored by the kind words and positive responses, and it gives me such a thrill to know my words have provided you enjoyment.

Michelle

I really like that..made me hard, and I have some ideas to think about. You should keep going. It made it to my favourites ;) good luck with writing

Chapter 2 is punchier, the shorter paragraphs keeping the action moving. I am really looking forward to this series.

Chapter 2 is just as hot as chapter 1. Thank you for sharing the things that go on in your naughty little mind Ms Albany. I'm really looking forward to chapter 3!!!!

You started writing stories here and didn't tell me? I should give you a good spanking for that, but I know you'd enjoy it!

Great stories, I really like the way you are building the emotion. Would it be asking too much for someone to pee on someone? ;)

Keep up the good work!

Well done, Michelle! A 5 star tale! Just one thing - Kissing 'led' to petting ... not 'lead' to petting! Julie and J.J. are one lucky couple! Looking forward to more of your story!

Very well written and great word painting to give good visuals. If stories were royalty then this would be a king among stories. Of course 5 stars from me kisses

the attention to detail was great as well as the story line .

I like the continuation! Very hot story

Good writing. Interesting story

Why leave at night?

Interesting start....

The only problem so far is he came on her and not in her.

TBC

Very hot - keep writing!

i liked it , it was hot and interesting for a short story i will read the next one

Love how it's a gradual process with each step more intense

I'm hooked.

I'm soooo enjoying the journey!

OK I couldn't help myself. I love this entry, although shorter than the first, just as captivating. Michelle sounds like my kind of girl. Keep up the cock hardening good work!

Kinda developing a bit of an itch here.

An more to follow

A wonderful continuation from the first chapter. JJ sounds so sexy!

Wonderful, thanks