by the_thinker97
Really well written and I'm intrigued as to what happens next.
I love a sub with Her own mind!!
5 stars.
You write her fear and anxiety well, and I loved her besting him.
Be interesting to see where you take this
I don't really know where this is heading, but I'm looking forward to chapter two and finding out!
Skillfully written and unique. You definitely have my interest piqued!
In some paragraphs it was a little to worded and I found myself skipping through most of it. It had a good story line to it. I want to read more of it though.
I just clapped my hands and did 'oohh I want the chapter to go on! I want to see!''
So you've got me on a hook, and I hope you are a fast writer.