All Comments on 'Julie's Blackout'
by RoughLove
- 4 Comments
Anonymousover 14 years ago</style>
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<p class=MsoPlainText>Although it seems to be true that some women abused as
children come to think of sex as dirty or something for which they must be
punished if they enjoy it, et cetra - e.g., Catherine Deneuve’s
character in Belle du Jour <span style="mso-spacerun:
yes"> </span>it seems implausible that an adult rape victim would keep
going back for more.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=MsoPlainText>I do compliment you on taking on a difficult issue<o:p></o:p></p>
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Anonymousover 12 years agoThat story wasn't very good. Nothing else to say about it. It's not good enough to just tell about her rape, you have to eperience. Instead of saying her date raped her, make it the present and describe her being raped. Otherwise, noone really feels anything. You have potential, but after this story, I won't be reading anymore of your stories.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoA short but well written tale that delves liberally into the mind and thoughts of the subject with clarity.
This story was rich with imagery that keeps the reader moving seamlessly til the end.
Very well written, thank you.
lily4nowabout 10 years agoInteresting take. I would love to see this expanded to a longer piece with more detail. Although, there is something about the brevity and succinctness that appeals, too.
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