by SylviaG
This was such a great set-up for the next chapter in this series! We'd all love to have our hand up a pantyhosed leg! Just ease off a little on the cruelty factor towards your husband. We all get frustrated, but remember, it's a two-way street. Either way, we're still looking forward to seeing what happens next.
I like the way the writer builds the sexual tension between and among the players, not just jumping right to the "wham-bam." Could be better in some spots, but all in all I appreciate the restraint and the effort to bring the reader along.
A wife playing a game that leads only to divorce, not really a smart action but then their conversations are really childish.