All Comments on 'July 4th, My Sister, the Lake Ch. 03'
by MaryAnderson
- 27 Comments
Captain_Fapulusover 8 years agoThanks you for posting this one and for making a real treat. The action was hot as hell yet didn't take away from the romance and the loveable relationship those two have. The inclusion of Shane thus far has been subtle and lays a great foundations to what they could do together in the future. Shane can even be Sams cover-up girlfriend if the parents (or somebody else) becomes too suspicious. If I could choose I would pick the sweet & innocent Bella but the interchanging personas work nicely with erotic diversity she offers that way.
Wherever this is going I hope you continue with the lovely setting of sibling love and that you'll hopefully leave it a trio that you've set. Maybe continue the trip to SF as there are lots of interesting paces to visit in the way, like a sexy road trip diary - should provide a lot of memorable experience.
Of course gave it a 5* rating!
Now only to patiently sit here and wait form more :)
Danno_61455over 8 years agoI have been enjoying you work.
5 star
Anonymousover 8 years agoif fact WTF was shane doing in chapter & why would they be worried about keeping quiet because Shane was there she knows they fuck
was hoping for 3 way or something new
Shane big brother ? (wasn't sis going out with Shane's brother Quentin who falls asleep after getting head job ?)burrowed his van thought he was going to be in story
Anonymousover 8 years agoA very good tale so far. I believe it's time to bring Shane into the mix.
mharrisonover 8 years agoThink I'd like to see Shane more involved but it's your story so you should go with whatever feels right for you.... Just please do continue the series.. Really enjoyed it so far.
DustyDevilover 8 years agoDo not leave us dangling in the dark for too long . This has been a good series so please continue.
Anonymousabout 8 years agoThat area is called the rant. It rant pussy and it taint ass. It was not in ch3 it was in Ch 2 I put in a committee but I for got the rant.
Thitabealmost 8 years agoPlease continue with this story. I love this story do far.I agree with most of the comments that I read. I would love to read Shane becoming more involved. I could see a threesome or two in the future and also some girl on girl action while he watches (to answer his question from chapter 2 about what its like for 2 women to have sex).
Olebillalmost 8 years agoJust wish it would have stayed brother sister and hope they could make it work.
laad4e08almost 8 years agoI really love this story line and these characters.
I could just keep reading about them forever!
Like to see Shane get in on the action.
Please keep it going.
Thanks for your work.
prop69almost 8 years agoShane is an important person to Bella. She should have been included. Either make her a sexual partner for both or deal with their relationship. I hope you will continue. Also, you left of the van and coming home. How did Bella and Shane get their clothes to CA? Still a great, erotic story.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoI think it is obvious that Bella is going to become very sure of herself and offer Shane a piece of her brother. Sam, not wanting to disappoint, goes along for the ride, and we find ourselves in a 3-way situation. Does jealousy enter the picture? I don't know.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoyou're leading me down the path ! I can imagine the three of them living together quite happily. They all get the best of all worlds together. Again, I love the way you make it all seem so natural and believable for me and them. You're a good writer but I really like your imagination and the way you put it all together so well ! Good job ! Scotty
Olebillover 7 years agoWhy is it so hard to find a story between brother and sister or cousins even where they stay with each other without fucking everyone else.
Turtle1952over 7 years agolove this erotic tale. Surely we need to experience the rest of the trip and finding a place to live. Maybe shane joins in now and then and they become a triple of lovers.
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