All Comments on 'JuneBugg Ch. 02'

So loving this story!! Can't wait to read more, update soon!

I like it but please please get an editor

You still need that editor, but I'm still giving you five stars. You are a gem in the rough.

I agree with the previous posters, you need an editor. Get someone to edit this chapter and repost it. You and your readers will notice the difference, your story will flow.

This story has promise, but the writing is atrocious. Other commenters are far too generous.

At the very least, you *must* get an editor. Too many problems to list; just find someone to help.

It is a good story. The only problem I have is sometimes you go from past tense to present tense. You said looked or touched but then went to looks or touches. I agree with getting someone to edit for you, but I still really liked the story. I gave 4 stars

I love it. It's so cute to read and adric sounds hot!!!

I so enjoy reading this story, I find it good and intriguing because of the characters and the love/hate budding relationship that they have with each other and the flow of the narration just gives it an extra push. However, I think you should find an editor ASAP because the change between tenses and some of the simple wording errors can be easier corrected. There are great editors on here so don't be afraid to get one. This story deserve to get 5 stars all across the board but with simple mistakes it is hard to give you the 5 so I gave you the 4. But this is an awesome story and can't wait to see what happens next.

THE STORY IS GREAT, AND IF PEOPLE ARE SO SIMPLE THAT JUMPING TENSE'S SCREWS THEM UP, THAT IS THE PROBLEM OF THE READER. THIS IS NOT PROFESSIONAL WRITING. THIS IS PEOPLE DOING IT FOR FUN, SO IF THE STORY IS GOOD AND SEXY, AND IN THIS CASE FUNNY TOO, THAT IS WHAT MATTERS, SO KEEP IT UP ( AND GETTING CAUGHT, IN SCHOOL. BY THE V.P ,THIS SHOULD BE GOOD)

I get that the story may need editing, i could see that , with that being said I could careless, I love this story so much update it soon please.

Luv it! Luv it! I can't wait to read more of Adric and June.

oh the suspense, get three out now, i want to know the rest.

please Please Go on!

I love it. Please add to it as soon as you can. I can wait to see what happens.

That was really good. I can't wait read more about them, so hurry up and post the next chapter.

I got to reading this story. You should definitely discontinue.

whoops? Teacher, I have a perfectly logical explanation for what was going on......

Love the story!!!!!!!

Oh, goodness. This story is really good. Please update soon. I hope all is well with you.

Another good chapter!!! Hope you continue :-)

i am waiting for more. this is hot.

you left us hangin!!!! :( but I'm likin the story personally cos I'm Hatian,French & Dominican. lol so that was a pleasant surprise

Please come back and finish!!!!!!

I have a soft spot for jocks... this story is hott! I need more...PLEASE!

Please Please finish this story.

Gave five starz cuz it is a good story and entertaning, but it needs an update like ASAP.

You really do submitt a chapter 3

please continue the story !

This is so funny because I'm June Pierre-Louis!

Cute story and Adric seem like a nice guy. Not the typical high school playboy that uses his looks and status in school to sex up all the females he meets.

Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please

You have to finish I think it's cute there both virgins and he's not a super playboy type

Please please please continue

another story not finish.

I need and want more, so damn good

You need to write more! I've read these 2 chapters like 5 times!!! More please!

Hey I really liked this story...Y leave it with a hanging ending..Please finish it..

Seriously 😒 19 years later and you haven’t finished the story 😭 you must have lost tour password and account. Come back 😭

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Rumor has it they’re still in the principals office