All Comments on 'Just a Chance Ch. 01'

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stroudlestroudleover 6 years ago

Carnt wait to see if Amelia ends up with lora. Or is consoled in the arms of mel .Nicely written . awaiting next chapter

JoyJoy4MeJoyJoy4Meover 6 years ago

It was too short but I'm hoping chapter two will soon be posted. I enjoyed it a lot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Nice start

I liked it. I hope there is more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Enjoyed the story, looking forward to seeing what happens next.

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 6 years ago
good start

As I have always said it is not good to introduce sex into a long standing friendship, as for dating one of her friends, as long as she asks her if she did not mind I would think it would be alright

Crystallised_TearsCrystallised_Tearsover 6 years ago

I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes, and hopefully how Amelia and Lora get together! My advice to Amelia would be to talk to Lora about Mel, she seems very level headed and stories seem to make you wish they would just tell each other the truth instead of lying, I feel like she's adult enough to not do that.

It's very well written and thorough enjoyable. Entirely too short, lol, I really hope you continue it!

QRD23QRD23over 6 years ago

CHAPTER 2!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Wow. Please keep writing. Your story is off to a great start.

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uover 6 years ago

So far so (damn) good. Keep it going

evelynsuwilanjievelynsuwilanjiover 6 years ago

I hate reading a story that is not complete because I can't stand the suspense for a long time. But curiosity killed a bloody 🐈 so chapter 2 and please make it longer ASAP or else am gona start pulling my hair out literally. Btw I love the storyline.

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenover 6 years ago
I enjoyed it so far

Please post the next chapter soon! Thanks for sharing this with us!

seetheartinmeseetheartinmeover 6 years ago
More please!

Excited to see where this all goes!

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