All Comments on 'Just a Flash'

Hope there's more to this story.

Smooth the dialogue a bit and add some more details to the development and backstory and you have yourself a winner. Hope to see more of these two.

4*

Good story of relationship between siblings.

Is another chapter coming?

I like this story a lot. Had me hard from the start and all throughout. It could stand on its own or you could add another chapter (or more), perhaps bring in another girl (one of Jessica's girlfriends from school) for a threesome.

5 Stars!

But I'd love to hear more about uncut cocks, the best kind, which seems to be one of this gifted young author's main concerns

Sexy writing had my 20 inch cockadoodle hard for a while while a chipmunk tickled my nutsack. Please continue so the sparrows can make a nest in my bunghole.

Yes, hot and arousing story !! Hopefully, in the next chapter Jess and her brother go for a ride in the country; so he can screw her well and she can scream her head off. Hopefully, Jess will act like his dirty girl from now on and they will learn to do it in many positions and they will start to cum all over each other and really get hot, stay hot and spend more time. Their parents will give them space and just be glad they aren't fighting any longer. Great story. Thank you.

The title of my comment says it all

can't get enough...the story is so good and pretty hot so please write another chapter or two...Thank you

The only take back I have from this is the scene change in the begining. I was so thrown off, I was trying to figure out what happened. First he's picking up his sister from school, next thing they're on a jet ski, and he's pushing her off. Aside from that ONE part, I thought it was a great, easy to read story with just enough character development to know who's who, a base idea of what they look like, and that's it. No 5 paragraphs describing in full detail what 3 characters look like. Personally, I'd rather get the basic details, and get on with the story (I'm like that with every story), so great job! It was fast paced, without feeling like the story was too rushed to end

That made me wetter than an ocean and hotter than the devil himself

Hot, hot story. Loved it. It got me going good. Really hot.

It's far from being finished, next chapter please ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ so far...

I would Love to see more of this story with more detate maybe the two becomeing long time lovers u did good i like storys like this i hope u keep makeing ur skills better

And thank u for shareing ur tallent with us ill give u an eight if u wright more to

This story i will up thenext score. From DC. STALLHAND

I wish I would have had a Sister like this .. A Must read in My Book ..

A couple of things make me go "...uh-huh..."

...as her vulva expanded to reveal her hymen... I hope you know it doesn't? As any girl can tell you?

Also, no matter what girl you have sex with you never ever tell her to work on her "orgasm sounds". Fortunately not every woman screams her lungs out.

This is a response to the comment by Anonymous from 6/17. It's hilarious for you to mention the author improving his writing skills while your post is overflowing with spelling errors, typos, and terrible grammar.

I've got to think that post was a put-on, because nobody could make that many errors in that short of a post accidentally.

BTW, the story was excellent.

I thought your story was extremely cute. Innocence becoming experienced.

blake is a jerk and a (man) no, a boy whore.

I found this story typical of brother sister sex stories...Not much 'new' here....

Too much instruction....Not enough just goin' with the passion....