All Comments on 'Just a Friday Night Ch. 01'

Makes me wish I was a female - I know I'd be a lesbian too! But as a male, it really turned me on - keep writing.

Nice first story. Love Melbourne and Aussie girls. So cute.

beautifully written

Can't wait to see what happens next

Hi, I really love your story! I'm sure you where nervous to post your first story but you did excellent and I adore it. Looking forward for more stories maybe of whom ever or whatever as long as they're written by you!

-BabyGirl/Haze.

Chpter two! Great start.

I can't wait for more the imagery was awesome

-Mdawg

I loved that! You are one very good writer. That was beautifully written, perfectly paced and hotter than a furnace. Please write more - LOTS more!

Thanks for a well-written, hot little tryst. You used just enough detail and character development to frame the sex.

You get five stars just for that Team Bella reference. Looking forward to reading the rest.

Great story so far, I hope there's more. I wish that kind of thing would happen to me. Damn, i need laid! The only thing I had a problem with was when they woke up and were at it again. I would want to brush my teeth, morning breath, ya know,. Lol!