All Comments on 'Just a Game Ch. 01'

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polkadot2polkadot2over 10 years ago
So Funny!!

Loved this!! Made me laugh out loud! Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
loved it

please hurry up with the 2nd instalment.... cant wait

sweetallissweetallisover 10 years ago

Funny, witty, quirky and sexy!

Well written with a good plot, taking your time to develop the story - loved it!

Hope to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
nerdgasmic

I had to share this with a friend who was shocked to see a girl in my D&D game. This is going to be fun, I can tell.

erotikpassionserotikpassionsover 10 years ago
not sure

i know i should not compare it with 'Picture Perfect' which to me is a masterpiece, but i can't help it. am looking forward to the next chapter and i hope i will like it as much. you left off where things started to hot up, hope the silly games are over. good plot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Really enjoyed it

Keep up the story!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great!

It's just one chapter but I'm already in love. Can't wait for more! Everyday I'm checking if there's an update :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Loved it

This is an awesome story so happy I found it and can't wait to see where this is going next. I'm also checking all the time to see if there has been an update. Can't wait

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

AMAZING KEEP WRITING I LOVED IT

adjoaqadjoaqover 9 years ago
Loved it!

I actually smiled throughout this chapter. Totally hot!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

DELIGHTFUL READ EXCELLENT .. BIG J

Hubbys_PrincessHubbys_Princessover 8 years ago
Every story of yours...

The guys are so freaking cute and adorable I just want to smoosh and squish them with cuddles and have mini versions to keep in my pocket and remind me that the world isn't such a bad place after all.

EdeyEdeyover 1 year ago

Wonderful story! Liked it very much ;)

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Keeping the "lit" in Literotica. Turnoffs: -Clichés -Flat, one-dimensional characters -Misspelling "prostate" as "prostrate" Yes, I have a stick up my behind about writing mechanics, but since when is it a bad thing to have something up your behind? (Wink...)

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