All Comments on 'Just a Game Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Since I've discovered your stories a few months ago, I've literally checked back almost everyday for an update, and you didn't disappoint! Please don't make us wait so long for the next one! Obsessed!!

ChrisSummersChrisSummersalmost 10 years ago
More

I agree, more please.

Xxx

Chris

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Wow!

So hot! Dean and Pete are so realistic (and their relationship is similar to one I used to have with a friend :(... Anyways! You shouldn't make us wait months for an update, I really wanna see the next one already! :D

sweetallissweetallisalmost 10 years ago

Superb writing, PLEASE give us more!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Outstanding!!!

Easily one of my favorites! I was so excited to see an update. Keep going please, it's awesome!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Keep going!

Please give us more...and soon!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
LOVE IT!

I literally cried out of joy when I saw this story updated. It's so awesome! Please, keep it up :) You have a huge fan out there

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
wow

Wow ... Your writing is amazing! .. Its extremely detailed the emotions they both shared I felt. Keep it coming

TurningintoCDTurningintoCDalmost 10 years ago
I loved the story!

You're a great writer. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
LAME ROOMMATE

That alice in wonderland reference...i was seriously reading along, wanting really slowly to this, and then i read that. Its the middle of the night, and i start cracking up, and wake up my roommate, who sees me with my dick out as I'm laying there, and i've just spent the last ten minutes trying to explain to him why this is funny....he doesn't get it...woe is i

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
you've got to be joking

There needs to be more! Everyone I go online I check, please give me closure!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

i need the next chapter! Please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

i need the next chapter! Please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

THIS IS FUN AND EXCITING BIG J X

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I cried when Pete was mean to Dean. I’m glad Pete is coming around.

HornyKipHornyKipabout 2 years ago

It's great how the relationship is developing between Pete and Dean.

Great setup and writing .

stockingguy78stockingguy789 months ago

I love this story! So sweet and so realistic. ❤️

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Keeping the "lit" in Literotica. Turnoffs: -Clichés -Flat, one-dimensional characters -Misspelling "prostate" as "prostrate" Yes, I have a stick up my behind about writing mechanics, but since when is it a bad thing to have something up your behind? (Wink...)

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