All Comments on 'Just a Game Ch. 03'

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darthatheosdarthatheosover 9 years ago
Qoutes.

Quoting LOTR while giving a reach around. SPLOOSH

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
LOOOVE

It's 3am and I seriously screamed when I saw you finally updated!!! I love this story endlessly, can't wait for the next chapter. Oh, and the cuddling part was so cute...

mashedpotatoehead45mashedpotatoehead45over 9 years ago
About died when I saw a new chapter!

I probably check twice a day. I love this story!!! Thank you!

sweetallissweetallisover 9 years ago

Very well written!! Hope you will continue this story!

ramblingrobinramblingrobinover 9 years ago
Very good

I love how you write. There is something very genuine about the characters and real in their interactions. Wonderful job.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
wasn't too into the crossdressing.

I know many people would like the crossdressing, however I didn't really like it. I prefer when they're just normal. But other than that I've really enjoyed the writing. It was written quite well. And it's very easy to fall inlove with the story :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

CROSS DRESSING PUT ME OFF I LIKE A GUY TO LOOK LIKE A GUY .BUT SINCE 1ST ONE WAS GOOD WILL KEEP GOING . BIG J

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
WOW! Nerds really are different . . .

Found this story very unsexy, but like any other car wreck, it is hard to look away. These guys feel pretty creepy and I hope they are not emblematic of Nerds in general. Their aesthetic sensibilities are pretty gross.

Hoping they get a clue before this is over. Writing must be good or I wouldn't still be reading, so well done. Dean seems a bit wierder, but a lot more likable than Pete. Hope this works out for them in a way gives Dean the love he deserves.

oshirixxxaioshirixxxaialmost 5 years ago
A beautiful development

This is a very heart warming story. Sexy as fuck too. I love reading about these two. Thank you.

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Keeping the "lit" in Literotica. Turnoffs: -Clichés -Flat, one-dimensional characters -Misspelling "prostate" as "prostrate" Yes, I have a stick up my behind about writing mechanics, but since when is it a bad thing to have something up your behind? (Wink...)

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