All Comments on 'Just a Game Ch. 04'

I loved this story! Can't wait for your next submission, be it more from this group, or something new. Keep up the great work. 5 stars.

Excited to see what you come out with next!

please let the next one be about avery and aaron on that spring break trip!!

Just read the whole story today... I Love It. Can't believe its over so soon. I hope you write a sequel with Arron and Avery.

Your stories are so great! I really really hope you write another series.

The lifetime experiances you've had,even if just only in your mind, have given you a beautiful, wonderious place to build these paintings.

They can't be fantasy!

I read it tonight with the supermoon shining over the Smokies

Now....The only thing missing is you ... here on the back porch in a rocker...

The whipporwells callin,

I've fallen in love again.

Thanks,

SliperyRox

Epilogue Part Two??

Every chapter was a work of art. I'm looking forward to more stories from you.

You are, by far, my favorite author on Literotica! I hope you continue to share your stories with us b/c I'll continue reading them.

please please please tell me that this wasn't the end!!!!!

This was a fantastic story. Can't wait for more! :)

I hope you continue with the story, but if cassie and gabe's story is over I hope you write one on Aaron and Avery and just let us know whats going on with Gabe and Cassie! You're a great writer, I really enjoyed this story!

Shame, please get Jill someone too, it'd be sad if she were the 5th wheel.

More stories, please?

Yet again, I'm here to tell you (like so many others) your stories are great. Are there a few similarities? Yes. Does anyone give a damn? Who cares. You can't please everyone, but rest assured you're works are amazing. I look forward to new postings from you.

Also, side note: I love the names you choose. There's no "Brittany"s or anything there would be more than one of in a class. Irrelevant, but just something I've noticed.

-onyx

You are an amazingly romantic, sexy, entertaining writer and I laugh my arse off when I read your stories! Kudos!

All of your female main characters have the same physical characteristics. They're all tall with nice asses and small boobs. The only thing that sets them apart is hair color. I'd like some variety, you know? Other than that keep writing!!

It's been 7 months now and still no chapter 5, Please just tell us live has gotten in the way and chapter 5 will be here soon,,, it's just not fair to leave us all hanging without telling what happen over spring break in the Cattahootchie,,,

Like everything else you have put up here, this is just such a great story, well written with great characters and wonderful pace,,, 5 stars all the way

Sorry to leave you hanging, masterearl. There won't be a chapter 5. But I am working (painfully slowly) on a sequel featuring Aaron and Avery that of course kicks off with spring break in the Chattahoochie.

to Aaron and Avery's story as well as Corie and Eric's. I have an idea for you if you haven't thought about it your self. Maybe Grant's dad Don has grown up enough to finally find love himself. He sounded cute and charming and needing some sweet loving.

Oh my god this was an AMAZING STORY! Please consider writing more about Cassie and Gabe or at least having them make an appearance in future stories. You write them beautifully. I'd hate to see these characters fade away. Keep writing though! You have such a way with words :)

stories I've read on Literotica. Your story, unfortunately, is unfinished. It demands yet another chapter--or multiple chapters. The love story between Cassie and Gabe certainly continued and we want you to share the hot story with us. Could there be a wedding in the future?--with Aaron as the best man and Cassie's friends as bridesmaids?

Thanks for posting.

Cass and Gabe, and also Aaron and Avery...also what about Jill?

Lovely series

thanks

I just discovered your work and love all your stories! So much so that I have read through every single one over the last week. I sincerely hope you are still going to continue writing - perhaps a new story for Avery and Aaron? Wishing you all the best!

....but the ending was pretty lame. Sorry, I guess I'm more of a romantic and want to see a better resolution to the story. Unless, of course, you're leaving it open to continue the story. That would be fine with me, great even. Thank you

I certainly hope you continue with this story because I really have enjoyed it and I do not think it is finished. SO...….

Story!!!!!

Really good. Hope you write more!