All Comments on 'Just a Jab Ch. 10'

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begoniajoebegoniajoealmost 8 years ago
Real good

Jolly good fun keep going.

FowlRichFowlRichalmost 8 years ago
Keep going.

Awesome story, doing great.

cindyp1976cindyp1976almost 3 years ago

I've actually read this story once but it was a while ago and I really am loving it you should post it on inkitt.com and get even more people reading it. it would be interesting if you continued the story in another book and they found out later after everything happens (don't want to say and spoil it for first time readers) that the contaminant was some experimental drug or a newly discovered plant extract that somehow got added to the meds the men were given. maybe it was a disgruntled scientist or something. but as time goes on the side effects become more pronounced like maybe john stops aging, gets younger or his aging slows and the women he's with regularly start going through this change too. just some ideas that could be cool

cindyp1976cindyp1976almost 3 years ago

I will pray for you and hope the treatments work for you feel better and keep us updated

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I want to write more stories floating in my head, hoping they are shorter. Had 3+ years but cancer is back and treatment is starting. Hopefully this time can be rid of it. 11 Sep 20. Trying to get back to writing. It's slow going, as after 8 weeks of daily radiation treatment ...

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