All Comments on 'Just another Babysitting Gig'

it was great , grandpa saw her and liked what he saw , she fucked up by letting the bf over so that gave grandpa a free pass to do as he wanted. good for him

Great story telling. Love your style. 5 stars

kinda cute story, it could be longer, but I still enjoyed it.

more of this

I liked the story, but I have a constructive criticism:

There were a few odd word choices. For instance, she narrated that she and her boyfriend usually fingered each other. So perhaps he's a VERY adventurous high school boy who likes it in the rear? Otherwise, that doesn't track well. Then she went on to say now they blow each other. I don't know that I've ever heard cunnilingus referred to in that way, but maybe I am wrong. And she refers to her hard pussy. I'm assuming it was supposed to be hot? As I said, this is intended as constructive. Matching word choice to gender and keeping that in mind will make for a better read.