All Comments on 'Just Being Wolfy Ch. 00'

by Jayleen88

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Love it

Well, that gave me a better idea how James fell in love with Gracie.

And the poem, the best.

Thank you so much.

Please submit the next chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
NICEE

Definitely exciting, god james is every girls ideal man *drools. :] Waiting for the next chapter!!

Jayleen88Jayleen88about 15 years agoAuthor
Future chapters date lol... :D

I've posted CHAPTER 8 and CHAPTER 9 already a few days ago so it should be available for reading soon :D CHAPTER 8 will definitely be approved TOMORROW (20/2) and CHAPTER 9 should follow a day or two later... I'm glad you guys love the POEM - another romantic side of James yet to be discovered LOL... THANK YOU for VOTING and COMMENTING!! :)

MygypsyMygypsyabout 15 years ago
Great

I really enjoyed your story so far. Not many Werewolf stories being submitted at the moment and although a bit different I really like this one. Keep writing.

punkin1077punkin1077about 15 years ago
thanks for posting....

this...it makes the rest of the story make sense for me...i was having trouble figuring out how james fit in but knowing now that he has been in love with her for 5 years makes it easier to understand how they could be mates...so thanks for posting this.

spearman1spearman1about 15 years ago
Absolutely adorable!!

A hell raiser from the beginning!! Now if you would only let her or James tear out Jerry's throat I would be a happy camper. I know I'm obsessed with the tearing of the throat thing but it just needs to be done. He is such a complete asshole he just needs to die a nice wolfy death!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
More more more

Great chapter, I can't wait to read what happens!

catori1catori1about 15 years ago
perfectly sweet

Jerry had those plans all along but who can mess with true love lol great now let the storm begin.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
cute story

I love how some teens can be cute, annoying and positively breathtaking at the same time. I can't wait to see how this love story develops. I think the alpha will have his hands full in the future.

Great writing.

*****

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Did you use an editor here?

It doesn't look like it.....

Gracie is a pain, James is an idiot, and Jerry is a fool!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I haven't read the other chapters yet but I'm having trouble with the Gracie character. She seems more like an 8 year old than a 14 year old.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Good writing

Im totally into this story already :) cant wait to read whats next very easy reading

AfricanQueen1991AfricanQueen1991over 10 years ago

Lol damn that's a lot of luggage

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