by lioness_71
I submitted a bug report to get the title changed so it will be in the correct order, and I did find one little typo (Sorry for that).
Now you get to wait another week for chapter 3. Muahahahahahahaha
super hot and brilliantly written on the one hand, and on the other... he's a jerk, having the cameras rolling is a big turn-off for me, and zero aftercare after an experience like that... i mean, seriously?!
(yeah, yeah, i know there could be aftercare in the next chapter. still pissed me off big time.)
My head is reeling after that chapter! Your writing is raw and graphic, exactly what I love. Will not so patiently wait until next week.
Hot as hell but what an arsehole.
Brand new vanilla girl and he does all that ....then walks off.
Bloody good story though.:-)
Yes, I guess in real life, this wouldn't be appropriate behavior. But wow, that was hot! I cannot wait for the next chapter. Absolutely fantastic!
Very well-written.. actually enjoyed the short switch of pov. Need to post the rest though, I'm BEGGING you. It's rare I find a story I can get into like this one.
Part 3 was posted today, hopefully it will be out by Wednesday.
It's the darkest of the 4 parts, hope you enjoy.
Girl don't you know you were born more advanced than men, if there is submission it should be male submission. Mine answered our door naked and served me naked, and at the odd timers when he was allowed to fuck, he was blindfolded. Till the day he died he did not know whether my children were his. As it should be.
The only thing most men are superior in are muscles, in all other facets of life we are better, faster and more dependable.
So any-time you act as a sub you are a disgrace to all of your sisters, even worse a disgrace to the children you did or could have born.
Love Janice
this is not something that should happen irl, unless it's just a scene being played out that had been agreed to previously, but holy hell this is getting hot. i want to be her so badly, to feel his whips play across my skin. to feel submissive and owned
to see how this plays out. It's all wrong but oh, so smokin' hot!
Dustin is a predator, nothing more, and 100% useless. The guitar is a meaningless distraction from this American Psycho ripoff.
I love it. Cant wait to read the next part. Better to wait til after work so I'm not so worked up and hard and horny at work.