All Comments on 'Just Curious Ch. 08'

Stockholm Syndrome the way he keeps her totally dependent on him for all her needs. Wish she'd use her safewords & show us she's regained a sense of self rather than just caving in all the time out of fear. She doesn't seem as if she has much more choice than when she was with Dustin. Marcus is just transferring her dependency from Dustin to himself. I want to see her get away safely but I'm afraid she won't.

I'm torn between the two sides of Marcus we see; occasionally he's caring & supportive but then he turns around & becomes hurtful & abusive, demanding she do dangerous things. She's still doing what he wants because she's afraid.

I hope the author allows her to outgrow Marcus & make her own choice after looking around, let her find someone who truly deserves her. We know Dustin doesn't & so far, neither does Marcus.

Agree with the last two comments even if they were anonymous. They made good points about the results of riding naked or rugburns versus rockburns.

I love the way you show Marcus helping her get over what the asshole did to her. The way he keeps pushing her to accept the way she feels and showing her submission is not only about sex but a way of life. Great story keep em coming.

Marcus=Dustin. Both pretty much the same person. Only difference is Marcus does just enough to make her think he cares for her. Maybe she'll smarten up and leave. Nthusiastic and the 2 other anonymous make excellent points. Sadly I keep reading and hoping for the best outcome for this story.

Though if you are looking for feedback I think it should have been more of a problem to that Marcus woke her with such anger, left her to stew in anxiety and insecurity about what caused the anger, and then as a first after coming back he tells her the actions he considered in his anger. In my opinion once he realised he shouldn't do those actions because it would be blaming her for her dreams that are a sort of PTSD, he should never have mentioned them again. Though ofcourse mistakes are human and especially when emotional.

So okay maybe he did tell her all the ways he wanted to punish her and make her even more afraid of angering him, and insecure in her postion with him. But then it shouldn't have been within hours that he told/requested her to forget that morning and trust him again. And even less would a woman with her background be able to indeed let go of such a de-stabilizing morning.

So, the gist of my feedback is you made working through that a bit too easy. But then again, stories don't have to be completely real-life-realistic, and the way you wrote it was good, I only realised my critic when I was thinking it through.

Keep writing!