by lioness_71
A realistic plot and well-rounded characters, I feel this story could be published as it is. It's definitely better than some books/stories I've paid actual money for. Great writing, a clear vision, you just need an agent! Keep it up! ;o)
I wish you could submit a chapter a day. Like how your chapters are so long. Really enjoying this story.
Great storyline it is very hard to stop reading very captivating story. Now I am caught up and anxiously waiting for the next chapter.