by randibyrnes
Dear arbdibyrnes:
This is a great story andI say :thank you" for writing abut Juia and James.
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Excellent very evocative sex and also great cooking, art and other information.
I am grateful
Appreciative in Ontario
I guess this means that there is still hope for ME to find my daddy issues girlfriend!
does this remind anyone else
"I wondered why you weren't wearing read,"
of the Title of another story
Words on Skin ????
Great character build-up. We really got to know them before the sex. However, at this point, we seem to know a lot more about James, than we do Julia.
Perhaps the next chapter can delve even deeper.
This is a great love story & a geat sex story too.
Now I have to read all your other postings.
Thank you, thank you, thank you!!
Your heart & mind are in the right place. PLEASE CONTINUE !!!
A great mystery story--can we figure how an old guy can still get it up without Viagra? Just kidding--I loved the plot and the story. Your description of Julia's arousal is one of the best I've read.
Good luck in the Valentine's Day contest.
A nice story, but the numerous typos are a distraction. The ending seemed rather abrupt to me.
I have an "old guy" and he is beyond fabulous! Would not trade him for two youngsters.
Finally a writer on LitE that is LITERATE. Thank You for putting forth the effort to publish. I'll have to check out your other stories on LitE & the Kindle story. Fantastic Story. Old guys rule!
Enjoyed that very much. Very romantic and erotic. Please write more! And thanks for this one.