by kandie
Honey, I love your stories! This story is one of your best ! You're one hell of a witter, keep up the GREAT works. Naked hugs and more sugar!
You gave very good detail of the fucking and the sucking. This was an excellent father/daughter story. Keep writing erotica. Yu do it well. The scene was vivid and the action hot. Way to go.
WELL THIS CHAPTER IS AS GREAT AS THE FIRST YOUR DOING A GREAT JOB OF WRITING THIS STORY AND YOU HAVE ANOTHER 5 STARS PLUS TO ADD TO YOUR STORYSI LOVE THEM GETTING TOGETHER NOW HOPE THERE LOOKING TO THE FUTURE,CAN'T WAIT TIL I START THE NEXT CHAPTER(CHAPTER 3 )KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK................................................."R".................................
Your story was great as far as it went, however it was implied that marriage was immenent, but the story was cut short by at least 2 pages to get there. Too bad!!!