by Scarlett12
You really have to follow this up or you will have people, lots of people of both sexes, hiring private detectives to discover your address and hammer on your door demanding another chapter! This is a beautiful story, beautifully told. Thanks for so much pleasure. Freddy, the British nut living in Brazil.
This was a fab story, brought back memories of the first time I fucked my best friend. Looking forward to the next chapter
This was great and very believable. Now let's hear the next installment, when you actually taste each other, maybe in a 69. Please.
A great first chapter -- this is a story I'd like to see continued. Definite chemistry, sexual and otherwise.
Two friends share a nice time. The writer captured the moment is a sweet and caring fashion.
How could you fall asleep on us. Please awake and give us more. I bet Mel tastes awesome.
The story was so sensuous. I can't wait to see where you go with the next chapters. I hope that they get to taste one another and experience each other in the fitting room or maybe on a train ride.
I really enjoyed your story! You should absolutely go ahead with this series. I wish I had friends like these two girls. And your language, by the way, is pretty natural.
Agreed with all the comments, the writing is naturalistic, which is refreshing, but just as important, I also actually believe the connection between the two. And the tone is really nice & easy, no angst, not precious, just a fun, agreeable read. Would definitely look for more, thank you!
This chapter was amazing! You are a great writer and should just write a whole series! I've always wanted to experiment with a girl just to see what it's like.
me and my friend have almost the same relatiohship. we even broach topic while drunk and laying in bed. but we've never done anything. the most, cuddle. but im almost certain this is how we both feel. except we both have bf's. which i guess makes it more complicated.
Your story is amazing! I have always wanted to do this with another girl, and your story describes it perfectly. This is one of the best I've ever read. Keep up the good work and PLEASE keep writing!
Good!!! I love tribbing and Scissoring. I Get Wet Thinking About It.
This just described one of my closest friendships almost to the T..hopefully i can have the same ending too ;)
I'm so fucking horny. My pussy is so wet. Time to play with myself
Hell, this was awesome. Got so wet. Gonna try tribbing with my bff too ;) All those pussy juices...yum.
Oh man that got me sssooooo wet. What a brilliant story. My wet pussy now needs attention. Thank you author.
A great story. While I am a guy, I enjoyed reading how 2 girl friends would get into a relationship. A few of the comments also said they had similar paths to their getting together. I thought It was a HOT story and will read #2 next. Yes, you got me worked up and yes I made a mess.
I see you have not written since 2011. Please come back with a female 3-some, a life-together-ever-after follow-up or just more good sex alone.
"She was a little coy sometimes but I think there was always some kind of underlying sexual tension between us."
After the description of her being naked. This makes no sense.
This is still my favorite story on here after years and years. Whenever I need a really good orgasm I come back to this story. Exquisite, beautiful, exactly what I desire.
Alcohol induced sex. How seductive and romantic. If only everyone could experience such emotionless, uh I mean ecstasy during sex. LOL!