All Comments on 'Just Let it Happen Harry'

Seriously. Do you ever listen to how people talk? They don't talk like you have them talking. The plot was hard to follow and the place where Harry used to work is called multiple things. Please get an editor to look your work over for you if you ever plan on submitting again.

Like many others on this site you comment pedantically. For goodness sake, read the story. Try to feel it as you read, to sense it happening around you. Don't stumble over pebbles and allow that to fill your mind. If you don't like the way I write, don't read me. Millions don't.

I enjoyed it. There were certainly a few points here or there that could have been edited better, but overall it was a fine ride. My criteria in the end is all about the emotional reaction, from laughter to tears, from anger to happiness. Yours was a little predictable but in the end I left smiling and pleased I spent the time reading it. Thanks M

Who cares where your centre of business is in new Zealand? Transport is either in the North Island or South Island if it is heavy freight and you can get overnight distribution anywhere by air. So if you are shipping refrigerators you need a Christchurch hub and an Auckland hub. If you are shipping dresses and underwear a single hub in Auckland will do fine. Who needs the analyst? Get a shipping manager.