All Comments on 'Just Now Ch. 01'

I look forward to reading much more. Thank you for sharing your exciting experiences with us - five stars.

but I find no evidence of either Dominance, or submission, or understanding of what either of those words means, anywhere in this story.

Well written but where is the spanking you teased us with?

THe story is good but I read to the end feeling teased -- what city did you travel to? Please describe yourself more fully -- are you a BDSM novice? The story can't end without something happening.... does it remain platonic? is there a spanking? does he become Dominant in the relationship for the week?