by AmandaSarah
I loved the first 2 chapters and i'd like to read the rest!
Now that you are done with Ransom will you start writing this again..? Please continue this story will you?
I just read "Ransom" & loved it. And then I got started on "Just One Game". I enjoyed the first two chapters. It got me all hot, but it's not done. I want to know what happens next. Please don't stop there. It's really good. Please pick up where you left off & continue, even if it's been 4 yrs. PLEASE!!!
My dear AmandaSarah,
I hope you are doing okay. I have come back to re-read your stories and I just can't get over my love for dark, handsome, tormented strangers :) please try to write another chapter of this story..it has so much promise!
-Isabella
This is a really great story. It would be nice to have another chapter. It's too long between each one. Don't let this one wait much longer. It's too good not to finish.
Great story. I like a story that has the heroine have some backbone. Bridget doesn't just fall under Reid's sexual spell after one manipulated orgasm. It's great to see a story where the heroine is not so desperate for a man that she will allow herself to become his willing slave after one encounter. Looking forward to more chapters. Thanks for a great story.
for not turning this into another Magic Dick story where his cock is so hot, she just can't control herself. Blech! Waay overdone & totally unrealistic. I cheered when she smacked him & stormed off down the road.
Good for her! Let the guy work for it for a change rather than having her fall into his arms helplessly!
Please keep going! Pretty please? With whipped cream & a cherry? Chocolate sprinkles, even?
I really enjoyed this! Both chapters, really. Are you going to continue with this story? It definitely has plenty of potential left!
Mechanica: I know what you mean! With this story in particular my chapters always seem to end up shorter. I'm working on slowing down pace - it's always been a tricky one for me! Thanks for your feedback, I really appreciate it :)
This isn't very clever or entertaining. Why bother to continue?
Thank you for continuing.
Love what you got so far though I feel that your chapters are too short or maybe fast paced a bit...
Anyhow, looking forward for more.
sequel to that first chapter. Well, you took your time but it was worth it. Thank you again for this well writing story.
So glad I didn't have to wait a year for that update, the suspense must have been killing everyone that was awesome. Looking forward to more Bridget and Reid.
And you absolutely deserve some kudos for the double updates - double HOT updates..Keep it up, the story is smoking and Reid is..hm hard to describe - but magnetic to say the least ;)
This story is so damn hot !!!! Ugh!! I never want to be these girls but I would've loved to be in her shoes. This was so sexy. Thank you!!!! Next one please!!!!!
Completely agree with Anon below. Also, I like how you pointed out the fact that a physiological response does not indicate consent. Great job
Agreed this is how it's done. Even if she was turned on it should be HER choice to surrender to him. Great job, keep going!
Impressive! Well written. Great timing. Perfect pace. Though no character development totally not need in this piece so far.
Are you planning on a long series of many chapters or is this a short romp? Love this direction. Hate it when she gives in, ever. Hope she does not run into a greater devil on the walk home. Unless Reid steps up but she would not get in that car again. Though there shouldn't be.. wonder if there were cameras and blonde b!tch gets to blackmail her and doesn't fall for it, driving Reid completely insane.
I read that you won't take a year again but please this is a superior story do not let us wait more than a month for each chapter.
what an amaxing update ! loved it , five stars !!!! please update soon for both stories :D
Just love it.
At least she got away safely...for the moment.
Lucky girl though.