All Comments on 'Just One Kiss'

Nice story - it had a good believable plot, enough character development to have it make sense, nice dialog - although not sure about feeling the prostate contract (can men really do that?), and just the right length.

In reference to the previous comment, A man can consciously contract his prostate, like a woman does "kegal excercises", which causes the dick to jerk, to stop urine flow, or in orgasm causes the sperm to spurt. wHAT A WONDERFUL ORGAN! Good read.

What a wonderful story. Nice intro, you captured my imagination with your description of the passion exhibited between the two lovers. The length of the story was just right.

You have great writing skills, especially your sex scenes. You, obviously, have taken a lot of time to polish the story and have a good editor, since I did not notice even one error, spelling, grammatical or otherwise. Well done. Very erotic. This could stand another chapter or two. ?? An easy 5-😊😊😊😊😊. Thanks for sharing.