All Comments on 'Just One Look'

What an amazing start to your Literotica career - this is an absolutely fabulous story. Please don't leave it too long before we see Chapter 2.

Chapter 2 please! Can't wait for it!

Awesome -- great writing, great imagery, slow build-up, great foreplay. Please hurry with this next installment.

I would have rated the story as 100, but I found approximately 100 spelling and grammatical errors! Overall you wrote a great story, but you need to use a Spell Checker and Grammatical Checker before you submit any of work on online and/or otherwise!

loved this one,,and as others hope for more thankx

Please continue the story and watch the spelling. This is a very exotic story....

Waiting for the next story in this series!!

Other than the grammatical errors and spelling, I'd rate this story as one of the better ones on Literotica.

that was so hot! Can't remember the last time I came as hard as I just did! Please write more! Wow x

you dont even understand how horny that got me

all the biuld up was completely worth it

PLEASE WRITE MORE OH MY GOD

Jake is such a dirty dirty dirty old man. He better not break the young woman's heart. And what's with your panties fetish? Very hot and erotic, if suggestively pedo

The pace was excellent and you stopped with just the right degree of tantalisation hanging in the air.

Gosh, that was a really great story. I just hope you make a sequel. I hung up on almost every word. Your pace and ideas were amazing. Keep it up. : )

WOW! I think thats all I can put into words after that! WOW! Please write a second one!!!!!!!

Your story line was great, detail was great, excitement was perfect! It flowed well, and kept my attention start to finish. I could feel all the emotions, and the heat!!

Five stars, I look forward to reading more of your work!

Wow! 5 pages of descriptive writing for a blow job.

Nice work but guy wise it lacked the hunter element. I'll say this though it would make a great start in a bigger story :-).

Absolutely a teriffic story, I fell in love today!!!

More!!!!11

spell check

Wishing for more

I freaking loved this story! The build up was so fuckin hott! PLEASE make a continuation, if not its own series! I need to know how exquisite their first time having sex was, from both the standpoint of Becky and Jake. The way you meticulously described their movements, their breathing, their pulse, their sensations...it's such a damn turn on!

Please write a continuing series based on this amazing story - it would be a damning dishonor to the literotica website and its long-time community if you left us hanging with hard-ons.

Right now I'm wishing my husband was at home and not at work!!

Jake came across as a creepy pedo when he was caught with the panties. I mean he's 27yrs old!

Other than that, this story was hot