All Comments on 'Just One More Time Ch. 03'

by Fish_Tales

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StangStar06StangStar06over 12 years ago
This just keeps getting better

Have some mercy though, will he ever get to actually fuck her? plus the last one hinted that the daughter ws doing her father. Can we see some of that? This is great!

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 12 years ago
Dry & Wry Humor'

Those internal " this is the last time" rationalization

dialogues are disconcerting because I hear the same words trying to buy time on my own 'bad habits of choice. I'll give you five stars but you gotta pride to Get OUT of my head!

pa47epa47eover 12 years ago
Yes

This is a great story......Makes me laugh.......thank you..

NymphMyosotisNymphMyosotisalmost 12 years ago
Lol

Same good flow with funny twists! Well done.

availableslave2uavailableslave2uover 11 years ago
I love.....

seeing your sense of humor coming though on these chapters. As usual, you've written a wonderful blow job scene. If you combine that with the witty double entendre, you have a 5 start story.

cumfountaincumfountainabout 11 years ago
One of the best

Continue some more parts with more secretive suckings.. Please..

I love it.. Reflects my exact themes..mmmm

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