All Comments on 'Just One Rose'

Hard to read one sentence paragraphs.

Very well done. I enjoyed the intelligence, humor and eroticism of your art.

Thanks: the saint

Interesting writing style. I think the story could have been slightly tighter, but overall I enjoyed it. It's always a pleaure to read a Lit story that has a plot and good writing. It was odd to me, though, that Nadia called Pope a mf during sex as they had just met. There were a few minor mechanical issues, but not enough to call the grammar Nazis. :)

...PD, with your quirky writing style. It took me a couple of reads but I finish this story with enjoyment and admiration. That you achieved an excellent work of erotica while managing to make your characters understandable and likable.