by Frocto
That was EXCELLENT! I wasn't able to finish the first page before orgasming! All of your writing was great (as far as I could tell), I liked the way Peach progressed throughout the story. It seemed a bit though like her change was independent of the items, but oh well. I also really liked the way you incorporated actual video game aspects into the story, it was a cool perspective for what life would be like on the inside (minus all of the sex, of course). Thank you so much, and well done!
Would you ever consider writing about other popular Nintendo characters? Zelda, Samus, Palutena, Lucina, etc.?