All Comments on 'Just the Thought of You Ch. 02'

What an amazing chapter!!!

I am so impatient to read what happens in Ch.3!!!

When can we expect it? I really hope you can post it in next 3 days or so tops, this is one incredible story. BRAVO!

Well that was just amazing and oh so worth the wait. One of the best stories....... I just love these two! You should publish, what more can I say except thank you and that I can't wait for the next chapter. M x

Wonderful and erotic series. Your writing ranks w the best on this site. Thank you for keeping the chapters long. I'm learning to savor each page, like wine, yet I'm impatient for each posting.

Wow...so I started reading your writing today and I’ve fallen in love with it. The way you manage to tell a story with so little dialogue is mesmerising. I’ve always thought that a good story has plenty of dialogue and conversation, but what makes your writing beautiful is not what the characters say, but what they think.

I’ll admit it, I like Jarod’s thoughts more. Surprising, since I’m a girl and should find the female POV more relatable. But there’s just so much angst and his emotions are so raw that it drives me crazy. I love how torn he is and I can feel his frustration. It may also be due to the fact that your writing is a little more effective in third person than in first. Just a thought.

Please, please keep writing! You are unbelievably talented and this story has been driving me nuts!

I love this story. I hope you are going to continue. Please, continue!