All Comments on 'Justice Isn't Always Perfect Ch. 03'

Yes you should continue. I got a little lost at the end when you started calling Farrah punkin. That might become an issue if you ever get both your punkins in the same room lol

See - Practice makes well almost perfect this time. But you are definitely doing a great job and improving with each story. And if you notice not a single Anonymous critique so far. Keep it going Cindy. Well done!.

It will be nice to get a description of harry farrah and cindy.

mother in law will try the taboo cock and will not resist temptation to do all things. She will convince her son in law that if he loves his wife he must tell his wife to follow her mother example. Ending scene: wife fucks bbc and mother in law strap-on her son in law; in the same room!

I really love the new characters that are getting involved.. cannot wait for more.

cindylynn34 I love your naughty mind.. you aren't too bad at this story telling thing. I'm sure hoping to read more from you and bust a nut or twenty.. thanks

Ellen is seeming less interested in church than in getting her kitty licked or fucked by black cock. Will her mom change that on her visit or get addicted too?

5 from me

Amazing as most of the story is....;))...every inter racial and post rape adjustment trauma and predicament wonderfully illustrated.....the 3rd chapter seems kinda alien to the first and second chapter!! ;))

Wish transition into the 3rd chapter details were less vague!! otherwise...great job!!:))

I have a feeling Ted will have his hands full when Ellen and mom get together

hoping you continue this.. love it.. lots of avenues you can take here.

Amazing Story. How will this develop further?

Sickening. Vomitous excrement spewed by a self loathing whitey.

One of the worst, if not THE WORST story ever!!!

I can't suspend reality enough to finish reading this drivel! I read parts 1 and 2, hoping you would take this crap somewhere halfway believable, but you haven't. I don'y usually comment on writings I don't like, but this is so horrible, I had to. Ech!

I couldn't get past the criminal getting away with rape, confinement and theft. Not my type of story.