All Comments on 'Justice Pt. 01'

just stop already

wishful nigger thinking.

EROTIC

"Gonna cum in your married white pussy baby.....gonna shoot my load all inside you now."

Giving in to her tormenter, Annette pleaded, "Yesssss, pleeeease cum inside me. Pleeeeease give me your cum!"

Shouldn't this be in Humor & Satire?

What are you doing reading interracial stories if you feel this way, more to the point the writers biography does not imply gender or colour.

Its a good attempt, but you've basically written what EVERY other LW writer writes about a black man with a white wife, you could have at least been original.

I quit reading after the initial meeting between the Chief and Terrell, simply because it was all too apparent the direction you were going. White wife becomes a slave to black cock and black man runs the city. Right. Thanks for making it typical. 1/5.

Next time, go for originality.

I'm looking forward to future chapters.

I've read many stories on this site over the years, generally preferring BW/WM tales. This is the first time I've read a BM/WW story so I'm not jaded about the theme or its delivery. I want to say that you know where a period belongs, you don't carelessly switch tenses, you provide a respectable if not generous amount of character development, and there is an understandable plot progression. These alone make this introductory chapter ninety percent better than most "virgin" submissions. Though this tale seems to be distasteful to some, I implore you to continue writing...perhaps in other categories as well (fingers crossed). Thank you for the effort.

Paybacks a bitch for hubby. Looks like Annette just discovered her self-worth.