All Comments on 'Justin Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

okay but for the unprotected sex. he's a walking std most likely with all the girls he's clearly fucking raw (and maybe some boys too like alex). ugh

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

The straight sex ruined the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I don't usualy like straight sex in a story either but you did so well of making it about Justin and mac that I didn't mind it. It was actually super hot. I'm happy to see there are feelings involved now. Eager to see what you will do with this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Yuck yuck yuck....

She may be a tourist attraction, but do we really need to read about it? So gross.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
eww

didn't really like the straight part in the story, should just be mac and justin

geemeedeegeemeedeeover 8 years ago

The threesome didn't bother me. Women are sometimes the gateway to gay sex. If a nekkid woman is present, it can't be gay, right? (Men might tell themselves.)

Then again, I'm a straight chick, so I was happy for her -- and a little envious. LOL

judojonjudojonover 8 years ago

i disagree i think it gave us a look at Mac as not being jealous. Was hot and showed that it is just sex guys and can be good with all parties. Good job and nice intro into the str sex and gay sex

sm1982sm1982over 8 years ago
3some didn't bother me..

Mac is used to hearing Justin sometimes when he would stay over and Justin had sex with a date. What I would've like to have read was how Justin feels about only having sex with Justin but Justin had various sex partners since they first hooked up. Why was he so easily okay with that and never addresses it to Justin.

Besides that minor bump, I am intrigued by Justin's serious talk when he mentions what they are doing is more than just sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I like the "NEW" Justin

I don't really care for Justin's straight interests in lauren; I'm much more interested in Justin and Mac. And thank you for Justin's much kinder side, and the kissing and full-on sex he finds with Mac. Justin has become a much nicer (softer?) personality with the hardness left for his cock and muscles. Give the masculine Justin the beginnings of chest hair -- the five o'clock shadow makes him a sexy guy!

ImpishKittyKatImpishKittyKatover 8 years ago
OMG!!!!

This is the hottest chapter yet!!!!!! I love that Justin is open to them being in a real relationship without changing himself to much. I can't wait to see where the relationship goes before they are caught by Mac's brother. Please keep them coming. I love this story.

davejames2117davejames2117over 8 years ago
so sexual

nice that mac can handle str8 sex as well as justin's kink it gave the story a nice twist

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
hot & kinky

This horny, long cocked bastard is incredible.He sounds like a horndog from hell, Riding his little bro whore, fucking some cheesy waitress, fucking her while his boy takes her from behind.I want to be a part of these freaks.Hot story, makes an old auntie dick hard as pipe.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
holy ###

so freaking erotic my cks bulging and wet from my pre couldn,t stop leaking 5 stars for sure

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