by kalamazoo707
Wow, this "queen" twist was totally unexpected. It was pretty great.
Y DID U STOP NOW U GOT A BITCH MAD AS HELL KALA Y IS U DOING THIS TO MEIM LOSSING SLEEP OVA THIS N U GIVING ME THESE SHORT AZZ CAHPTERS COMMON GIVE A GURL A BREAK. N MY LIL JON VOICE HAANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN WAT LOL
So, she's the next queen and Quinn is her mate? Just amazing! And it's good to know that Pam is being looked after as well.
This is good stuff. I am unable to sleep through the night I awaken at 3am every night. Yes, I suffer from insomnia. Your posting help me to settle down so that I am able to sleep until 8 am and start my work day. I am a fan of your work an looking forward to reading your update.
Can't sleep, but I always look out for all new chapters of your stories, love them.
KALAMAZOO 707!!!!!!! What are you doing to us, your faithful readers?!?!? We read every single installment of every single story over and over and over AND OVER!!!!!!! We've gone from waiting 2-3 days for updates to waiting 10-12 days for updates. We overlook grammatical and spelling errors. We hang on your every written word. Yet, we still only get 2 pages. C'mon, Kal! From reading your other stories, we know you can write WAY more than 2 pages. Can we possibly get 3 pages for this next update? PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE???????
Ok, I got that off my chest. I'll just keep reading and wait with my panties in a bunch until I can read the next update.
Please don't ever stop writing!
it was an excellent chapter can not wait to read the next chapter
Wow!!! great story cuz im so happy that they know they are suppose to be together. Cant wait to read the next chapter. I cant wait to read about mating in the next chapter hopefully and let her become The Queen she is!! Let him be her King!!! and make beautiful babies!!!
Who is Justine, and what is her destiny? We now know a little of the past; however, the appetite is firmly whetted and the hunger for more ever increases...
Thank you!
M1
The suspense is killing me. You are doing so freaking well with this story! I'm seriously impressed with how great this is. Keep it coming, please!
Excellent chapter as usual.Always leave me wanting more and more.hurry with the next chapter please.
Kalamazoo I swear that third page with just a couple of words on it just drove me crazy.
I was looking for another full page and BAM!!!! Cliff hanger...lol As always you are an excellent writer and as always I'm stalking each word you place out for us. I can't wait to find out what will happen in the next chapter. On pins and needles.
I knew Justine was special, but the future queen. I never saw that coming especially since her turning was an accident. And she has admitted that Quinn is her mate although they have yet to do anything about it. And Quinn is so cute to be worrying about her getting "human blood" that I think he will make her feed from him. Now if they can just stop long enough to really think things thru.....
You are writing a very strong female character that is a true joy to follow.
Lol I love this guy Instead of freaking out about how vampires exist he's thinking "Hmmm...How can I get her some HUMAN blood...hmmm" lol I love all your characters they are all awsome Quinn and Justine and Buddy are my favorites! Keep up the good work can't wait for the next chapter!!!
First I want to say all of ur stories are amazing. Now that you have finished Vanessa and Veronica. And I'm not to sure about Patrick would have loved to read a lil bit more about him. I hate waiting 5 to 7 days to read more. Since this is the only storie left for now can we at least get 2 to 3 chapter with at least 3 pages each chapter?I know u can do it. reason being u were writing 4 stories at one time. That way you can finish off Justine and move on to ur next STORIES waiting patiently.
It's about time she recognized quinn as her mate. I wonder what mikhail would do if or when he catches up with justine and quinn. I wonder how long it will take her to listen to zoe and actually go to the queen instead of continuing to put herself and quinn in danger.
Made me lol onto the floor. It made me think of this phrase....you dun goofed.
I am glad that her mate is with her. I hope that they will be able to stay together.
You had a few typos but it was not to bad...LOL
I can't stand it anymore... The only thing that kept me reading this story was not knowing what Justine was. Now, that that need is sated... The grammar is probably the last thing I paid attention to, because the story has so many holes it's not even funny. The protagonist is ridiculously overpowered, probably because you didn't bother to define for yourself what abilities she should have or constrain yourself to the minimum needed for her to survive. Everyone seems to know whatever they need to know, unless someone else doesn't want them to know. Natural talents and abilities play absolutely no role and apparently the characters use the author's mind to gather information they need as much as more conventional means such as questioning other characters. The beginning was promising at least...
To eugene???whatever
If the story is so bad why bother reading past the first paragraph? Funny, I was taught if a person had nothing nice or constructive to say then "shut up." You probable won't read this since it is so long ago but personally you are just rude.
To the author awesome story, yes some mistakes but who cares. I like the surprises, twists, and turns. I have read this entire story several times and still come back to it. Thank you and please keep writing
Great character manipulation and storyline as the noose apparently tightens around our heroines. Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.