by Ken Nitsua
I never really read the Gay boy stories but this one was interesting. Really well written and great plot.
I was glad that he got him in "the end". BAHAHA. sorry.
when i went to HS, it was nice to see how the ugly duckling grew up to be a beautiful swan.
i too was one of those that didn't even make the cross country team! but now at class reunions, etc. , i'm the lean, mean and successful one who gets hit on by some of those jocks of yester-year!
This was an awesome story! Sexy, real, raw, human. You captured that teen angst and awe everyone has and the way key events stick with us, inspiring us for years. I especially admired the rough realism of "Wilson's" first time, as well as the fetish that grew out of it, the symbolism. And there was real charm to the coda, the reunion of these two and the shift in their adult relationship.
You're a gifted writer and I hope to read more of your work. You really put the reader there.
Hey Ken,
Wow!! Awesome storytelling guy! I really loved the way you described the HS shower scene; the ring of truth always makes for a good sell. Great sex scenes too. Erotic without being overly graphic. I believe that erotica and pornography have separate names for a reason.
Anyway, keep up the good work. And Thank You!
Jim
Great story, man. Lit needs more writers like you. I'm going through all your stories. Keep up the great work!
This story was on par with the best I've read in magazines.
Was a gem!! Great characters and a nice storyline. Hope you write more like it!
Very hot and sexy, and the writing was at the level I'd expect of a fiction author.
It's rare that I find a story that's well written AND erotic. Usually, I just skip past all the plot crap and go straight for the sex, but this story kept me glued in. Definitely one of my favorites on the site, and proof that erotica doesn't have to be sleazy. I loved it. Great job, thanks for writing it!
JSUK in my HS xC is even more important than football but overall good stuff
Loved the story -- Justin seemed even in high school like a good guy who wouldn't squeal on Wilson. I would have liked to see some chest hair on Justin -- after all, he had the thick pubic bush spilling out of his jock, and hairy thighs too. So glad to hear Justin and Wilson reconnected.
I had a similar experience but he knew who I was when I saw him 10 years after high school. We only had oral sex when we met again. He told me he really like me in high school but was a afraid. Brought back great memories.
Really loved this story. The sex was hot. But your composition and writing style made it even better. Realize this was written a long time ago and there was no voting but I give it 5 stars!
Hot, love the jockstrap memories of high school, I find myself thinking of jockstraps lately as I explore my growing desire for oral with a guy and think about the old gym days and seeing my friends after practice in their jocks. Like the idea of trying oral with a guy wearing one. Loved this story!