All Comments on 'Kady Does It All: Summer Daze'

I'm unused to genuine literacy here. Great read!

Loved this... can't wait for Kady to get together with the lovely Angela...

Not a biggie, but you describe the party as being on an island and how everyone got there via boats and then mention music being blasted from the back of pickup trucks. The apparent contradiction pulled me out of the story for a minute.

Thanks, Geon54, I did drop the ball there. I'll keep a better eye on it in the future, thanks for pointing it out.

Couldn't tear my eyes away. So well written, deep and visceral. Thanks for the ride!

I met a man much like Neil my first year of college. He was going back to school to start another career at 42. He taught me so much about life and sex. I actually used to see him after college, every year or so and we would have two day marathon sex sessions. Thank you Keith from the bottom of my heart, Laura. And thank you author for letting me relive those wonderful moments.

Im not a writer so I don't really have the words to describe the feelings this story invoked. Let's just say I'm jealous of a fictional character. Well done bard. This story was pretty amazing.

Just finished this and I hope you continue to explore Kady's thoughts and desires a little more. I would love to see her open Angela's mind, maybe run into the boys from the beach and get to know them more in depth. Pretty sure she could find a girl or two who would love to spend some time with a man like Neil. Can't forget about her brother, mother and hopefully her father. If you don't that's OK, I've enjoyed the ride. ;-3

You write extremely well