All Comments on 'Karen's Slavery Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Better yet - get an editor and rethink the whole thing.

Ugh!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Basic anatomy

You can't push a dildo past the cervix unless she's in labor, the opening is like the size of a pinhole. It takes five seconds to Google that, its disturbing that you don't know it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I enjoyed it a great deal and am really looking forward to the next chapter. 5 Stars

Cindy1001Cindy1001over 8 years ago
Very good

I never was good in biology, so I cannot comment on that, but having mentioned that you are not a bdsm-practitioner, I really admire you for your imagination and vivid details. And of course a wonderful narrative. Applause

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 2 years ago

This is a superb story. I'm really enjoying in. On the other hand, ""The staff are all very well paid; even the maids make at least $100,000 per year and since we supply housing in the chateau, and all food, liquor, medical expenses and private schooling for children "

Why should the slave girl give a shit? Her abusers are well-paid to abuse her? Woohoo, I'm still not seeing why suicide isn't the superior option here? I'm giving this 5 stars because it's a really fun story. I'm just confused about the fact that the slave girl carries on like it's a meaningful option.

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