All Comments on 'Karina The Sorceress Ch. 04'

Been a long time since this story was updated but I was very glad to see the update was worth the wait.

This writer has a wild,whacky,weird and funny imagination!!;))My my wasn't that entertaining?!! ;))

More chapters, please!

wasn't around before, but these tales are awesome

I am looking forward to more chapters.

One of my favorite stories on the site. Bring on more perils for Karina!

This is one of the best stories I've read here. I hope you'll write a sequel. Karina deserves it. You're a great writer.

more pleeeeeeeeeeese

Demon stories are path too well trodden. This is entertaining and well written but it is always going to be really difficult to be original. The "Agent in Distress" series has a lot more promise and deserves priority. IMO. But who am I to say as you can write but I can't!

It started so well, I was extremely aroused but also hoped well for Karina... I knew the story wouldn't end well for her, but I can't help but be disappointed by the ending. You made it too obvious that she was getting tricked, and kinda made it ridiculous. Everything just went badly and there wasn't even anything erotic really (compared to say, chapter 1). Alex just leaving her didn't make much sense either. You could've at least made it dramatic and despairing as he dies trying to save her from becoming the demon's slave forever. Unless he was the demon all the time, but then you should've made it clear to Karina. Now I'm just sad for her and kinda annoyed :/ Anyway, great story. The fact that you made me develop any kind of bond with the main character in this kind of story is really good already. Defo gonna read the other one in due time.

This story is just perfect, I wouldn’t change a thing. Please continue writing this captivating plot.

If anyone happens to check the comments, I just wanted to thank you for the wonderful encouragement. I do think about Karina often, but I haven’t figured out where to take the story. I feel like the lynch mob for Agent in Distress is bigger, so I’m trying to satisfy them first, but I promise I’ll write more Karina chapters when I can spare the time. If anyone has ideas for direction of the story, sometimes those are very helpful!

Xoxo

Tanuki

Great story and I found every chapter erotic as well. Poor Karina yet at the same time there is something powerful about her. I like her both her passion and her resilience and long may she keep fighting to be who she wants to be.

Alex purchases her, perhaps as part of a team. however, her she comes with a chastity belt that prevents her clit from getting any attention, leaving her crosseyed with lust over 3 months as he enjoys her.

I've been checking back for years to see more of this story. Since this chapter came out last year, I've been checking monthly. You're such a tease, Tanuki!

This is an amazing story. Sensual, plot driven, interesting, and hot. You do a damn good job.

Damm these stories are good. Please tell me you're making more chapters! The detail and visualizatin is amazing.

It doesn't seem so good to me. (3*)

The trick ending is quite banal.

... and, as you haven't continued this story in 4 years ... probably you too think this is not so good ... and you don't know where to leed it

I can’t wait to see how she goes through the perils of the next chapter! What delicious torments will be forced upon her. Will she finally cum? Will she endure pleasure and pain? Will Alex end up as the demon after all? Will the man who tricked her have his way with her? Will the Crusaders find her? Please write more!!! You should have a patreon. I would donate.