All Comments on 'Karma Ch. 01'

Enjoyed the story, looking forward to part two. Maybe force her to do a rim job and fixed slave. Or better yet force her to prepare and female for you to fuck. Can't wait to read more.

What the hell is he going to do if she likes the rough treatment, and wants him back in her life as her husband.

Wouldn't that be a big downer on his revenge trip, to find out all he ever had to do was make her submit to him.

Thanks for the read.

Oh wow... how DARE she deny him sex if he always wanted to do something that she hated!

She is supposedly submitting to his abuse as an alternative to paying him money. So why does he give her an envelope full of cash?

Agree with previous comment - what's that about him giving her money? She was supposed to have an unpaid debt to him which she had now partially paid in kind. Also, her name changed to Andria a couple of times.

She has to pay each month, he is returning the money so in effect she hasn't paid.

Liked it at the beginning but got a bit too violent after a while. This may be down to personal preference but I think many would be rather disturbed by the violence and lack of empathy displayed. Good writing style though.

Under stood the story the comments confused Me. OK as I read the story He wants REVENGE!!! She needs money to save house and her financial status. He humiliates the hell out of Her. She gets monetary assistance this is now their relationship. Whats not to under stand? New rule for comments, You need to be smarter than a 5th Grader. HuH!!

To many switches of her name, either it's Dana or Adriana... That was distracting and detracting as well as the money thing, he shouldn't be paying her if she's paying him with sex.

The definition is sexual intercourse by force fear or fraud. She is scared she is going to lose the house, there is the fear factor. Isn't it enough that he has taken her kids from her?

Good to read of some bitch getting pay back. Too many women fuck over their Men and laugh about it. Up yours to the children who can't handle it - go read a fairy tale.

I liked this, well done.

This was simply rape and abuse. What was interesting or entertaining about it?