All Comments on 'Kasper's Den Ch. 08'

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Shy_Bottom69Shy_Bottom69almost 7 years ago
Very hot (as always)

I loved waking up to this...

..Until I read that jibe "Gross. He's like 30..." Ouch, then I remembered young love...

Thanks Emri

--Izzy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
I need more

Please update again soon I can't get enough of this story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Damn I just love ur stories

Can't stop reading. ....wish it didn't end....I want more......I want more......love u.....PJ

canndcanndalmost 7 years ago
Perfect timing

I hadn't been on in a while and was excited to see this update right on top. Very hot chapter. I wouldn't have objected to seeing amir kick that devil's butt. I felt so beast for emi feeling like he failed kas. I love how he is fighting for kas to be independent like he wished he had been. It was nice to see Taj doing so well too. Nice chapter. I love seeing kas and emi together but still hope kas finds something he loves to do. Maybe with the yoga or whatever.

tarzanacidetarzanacidealmost 7 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thanks everyone! Sorry it too so long. We have had too much going on here and a crazy heat wave (Seriously! 106 in Tarzana!).

I am going to do a chapter of Noah next. It's so funny how when I write one chapter I get three emails asking if I'm going to do a chapter of some other story I haven't updated in a while.

Like Cage! Cock! Cairo! which I stopped updating almost a year ago because people weren't too into it, and suddenly I get a bunch of emails about it. But I guess that's what happens when I have five series. I'm just always so honored when people like what I write. I always worry when I post that this chapter is going to be the one everyone hates.

Sorry for the rambles. It's who I am... :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Your stories are my smile for the day. I get a little ping of happiness whenever I see a chapter update. PS. I also read your blog. I just am not someone who likes to comment publicly. I hope you know that your series are very well received and appreciated.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Consent?

I love your stories. In this one though, I was disturbed that Amir didn't ask Kas for his consent before allowing the guys in the other car to see them. There's no consent. It's not the same as the Devon but the dynamic - not making sure it's ok with Kaspar - is similar.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

You are a talented writer. Stories have good flow and character development. However, what other readers don't see, or maybe they do, is that your stories have a serious racial undertones to it that I don't appreciate. Fair skinned men are weak and need to be protected from the lion? I think you delved into it several chapters back with Amir trying to explain to kasper that when white people came they realized the power of the lion. If you want to play with sub/dom, gender play (ass as pussy or panties?) that's fine. But when you bring race or skin color or ethnicity into that, that's a turn off. And all your stories contain this, Arabs as the protector, the men, its silly and racist. And I can't believe other readers or even you don't pick up on that.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Much Love

Just wanted to let you know that I love your writing. I'll be the first to admit that when I came across your first story, I wasn't sure if I would enjoy it. Well let me tell ya, I love, love, love them!! I get so excited when I see a new chapter from you. I just finished Cage, Cock, Cairo and I want more! I really hope you pick up on that story again. You are an extremely talented writer, keep up the great work. I'll just be patiently waiting....♡

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