All Comments on 'Katarzyna Strips Ch. 02'

It would be nice if you provided an author for the first story. I did a search and came up with nothing.

English is my 2nd langauge, so it may be yours! However, some mistakes that I can see in your story have nothing to do with not being a native speaker of the English langauage!

Edit your next story better!

Irredeemable.

as an act of charity and you will have to re--submit!

never continue someone elses work that is felony plagerism delete this at once and never post here again

as bad as this was, the 1st part was worse

Kiedy 4, 5 lat temu dalem jej prace w sklepie, ze dwa raz w ciagu 10 minut sie ztegowalem. Raz w gardlo, a raz na nos...sama zlizala i z twarzy i z jaj!

Co do Liliany, to jak zacizyla, to nikomu nie dawala -- byla wierna dla jej przyszlego Meza. Raz mi sie nawet udalo ja posadzic na kolana i zlapac za spody piersi. Podniecila sie i mogla nawet szczytowac, ale uciekla i sie bronila, to ja zostawilem w spokoju. Bardzo wierna kobieta.Ja przewaznie nic o kobietach nie mowie; jak ona cos o mnie powie, a nie dala, to dupe obrabiam, a jak dala, to pare pierwszych razow przebaczam, ale posuniac sie do pisanie historyjek, o watpliwej jakosci to nizej swini...

Jak by byla zrobila, to niech teraz zrobi. Szybciej, lepiej!