Kate and Jake Ch. 01

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Jake smiled from ear to ear, and said, "Thanks, Mum. Are you really sure?... or have I emotionally blackmailed you into a corner where you feel you can't say no?"

"No, love, you've not manoeuvred me into doing something I don't want to do. If you were just a randy young man who wanted to get his rocks off while waiting for a teenage girlfriend to come along, I would definitely say no, and also be offended. As it is, you do have a problem; I can help; and I am more than willing to do so... happily."

"You're the best mother in the world. I won't take advantage of the situation to step out of line, or make you feel uncomfortable. You are still my mum, and I will always respect you as such. I promise you that," he said.

"Thanks, Jake, but on that note, we've always worked together in solving each others challenges in life, so let this be no different. We've both admitted to fantasies involving each other, so while this is essentially an educational and therapeutic project, let's work on it in a relaxed way, with that peace, love, and harmony that we have always enjoyed; have a few laughs along the way -- and if something feels nice, let's enjoy it, and feel free to say so. Let's not be too stuffy or mechanical about it."

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Foxterot7aFoxterot7aover 2 years ago

Liked the story so far. Like the character development. The predicament of the respective parties is logically developed. The one unanswered question is when the mother became pregnant at 16, where was the charge of statutory rape?.

Rake456Rake456over 6 years ago

This really doesn't flow at all. People don't speak in long blocks of text, generally. You need to make it more natural. Split it up with the character undertaking an action or something, and make things more concise. And keep your exposition out of your dialogue as well, or at least integrate it better.

I like the premise, and it's atrociously written or anything, but it could be better.

sglewsglewover 8 years ago
Good first chapter and no you didn't spell 'grey' incorrectly

Enjoyed the chapter. Pity that people who comment about grammar make grammatically incorrect comments.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Pssst...

You spelled "gray" wrong. One of several errors...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Enjoying this

I enjoy the stories you write on here more than others because you use real life experiences that, as you said, you or someone you know experienced and I feel that that makes the stories just a lot more enjoyable in general because it shows/tells people that this isn't necessarily just a work of fiction, that it is somewhat real, if changed a bit :) (I hope I managed to get through what I was trying to convey, I suck at finding the right words sometimes.)

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