All Comments on 'Kate and Jake Ch. 08'

by JamesMarin

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

hot hot hot

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Awesome!! Continue this for a long time. Just a heads up for you most people won't vote as high for a one page story as they would for a longer story. I ould suggest that you try to keep them at least 2 pages each.. Of course I'd prefer each chapter even longer.

Keep up the great work!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
DAMN!

Ho-ly shit! Damn that was good. Would have loved if there was more to it. That was very well written and VERY erotic. Wow!

papabeardougpapabeardougalmost 9 years ago
I agree with others on this

I agree Ho-ly shit you have a super story going here, please keep it going. I can't wait to see how all of the different lives they are exploring workout for them.

PB

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
more please...

Thanks James, for another super smokin' episode. I had a feeling that K and Js' high level of fitness would sure come in handy. They seem to be getting all the exercise that they need...lol

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aalmost 3 years ago

Story gets better and better. This was an accurate text book description of BDSM lifestyle. It will take the son time to fully understand the lifestyle; however, with the help of his experienced mother, the learning process will bring untold pleasures to both. The sensitivity, passion, respect and willingness to please each other makes me wish these characters were real and that I knew them.

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