All Comments on 'Kate and Jake Ch. 13'

by JamesMarin

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
gee...

Thanks James, the chapters are coming so wonderfully fast! Yet another new addition, I sure hope that young Jake will have the stamina to satisfy them all...lol Myself, I'm just poppin' out for some more lube, gotta feelin' I'm gonna be needin' it badly ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

longer chapters geez.. you just start to get back into it and blam it's over.

SWT3SWT3over 8 years ago
Interesting turn of events

Looking forward to learning what happens when all four get together.

billyjim55billyjim55over 8 years ago

What an interesting twist hahahaha ,,, good job.

RasmatRasmatover 8 years ago
Yes. An interesting and unexpected turn of events.

I have enjoyed everything you have submitted to date. However, I am, in no way, into SM behavior of any sort and such a short chapter, like a pinky-size slice of cheesecake (tasty as both may be) is sadistic, pure and simple! LOL!

Mymantoy999Mymantoy999over 8 years ago
Yeah I agree but also understand!

Yeah I agree with a couple of the others about it being disappointing with a very short chapter suddenly thrown in, **BUT** I also understand that you really needed to set up the next chapters so that there was a fairly even flow as things progressed. Good job in that respect!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
yeah, another subtle twist....

I've got a feeling that they're all going to get along like a house on fire! Kate is going to have two lovely young ladies to share Jake with, and what a truly lucky boy Jake is going to be...at least I hope that's how it pans out, but you can never tell with James...lol I might need a spare tube of lube tho' ;)

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aover 2 years ago

I can actually picture this conversation happening between women. There is no ego. self-esteem nor pride involved. Just an honest, frank discussion. Hell would freeze over before such a conversation it would happen between men.

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