by Joanmcarthy
Excellent writing, your story got me very aroused. Loved the whole scenario, very authentic, and the dynamic among the 3 main characters was described perfectly. I also loved the little details, for example how you described Kate's sexual response, and the sounds of their noisy copulating being heard by Ben. Hugely erotic.
Please write more. You Aussies write some great erotica, it must be something in the water out there! As a Brit, I find it similar in style to ours ... guess it's something to do with our shared history and the Commonwealth. Thanks again.
Thanks, well written, erotic, believable. What's not too like?
I'm hooked. Truly love your writing...story after story!